2022年6月四级考试真题第3套解析Part IWriting结构框图：第1段引出话题：强调校医院的重要性，引出校医院的服务需要改善的话题。A Proposal onImproving School第2段具体论证：指出校医院在疫苗接种以及组织体检中存在问题，并针对性Clinic Service地提出解决方案。第3段结尾：表达对建议效果的期特。范文点评：参考范文精彩点评A Proposal on Improving School Clinic Service[1]The school clinic has been playing a critical role in our【1】肯定校医院在大学生活中的关键campus life.[2]However,with university lockdown,problems作用。have emerged.[3]Therefore,I,a junior from Law School,am【2】用However转折，指出校医院存在的writing to make a proposal on improving its service.一些问题。【4】The problems and suggestions are as follows,.【5】First of【3】Therefore提示上下句关系，引出写作all,many kinds of vaccines,are only available at off-campus目的。hospitals,which is quite inconvenient.Since our school hospital【4】引起下文。has professional doctors,why not provide relevant vaccination【5【6】使用First of all和Secondly分别services on campus?[6]Secondly,it has been'quite tiring and指出校内无法打疫苗、体检耗费时间time-consuming to have a thorough physical check-up owing to the和体力的问题。huge number of students.Hence,an appointment App or asimilar system will be indispensable to improve efficiency.【7】【7】提出为学生们提供紧急医疗救助的In addition,it will be better if necessary emergency medical aid培训。training can be offered.[8]The commitment of our school clinic is appreciated by all【8】结尾段，感谢校医院工作人员，并真诚students and faculty.I sincerely hope that my proposal can be希望上述建议能有助于校医院发展。adopted and our school clinic can provide better healthcare services.话题词汇：school doctor校医vaccine疫苗，high quality service优质服务infection感染be committed to致力于symptom症状regular health checkups常规体检healthcare医疗保健medical consultations.医疗咨询epidemic prevention.and control疫情防控surgery手术timely diagnosis and treatment及时医治