2021年6月大学英语四级考试真题(二)答案与详解Part IWriting星火英语App扫码看视频T结构框图:第1段引出话题,表明观点:科技让人变得懒惰吗?答案是肯定的。第2段具体论证“科技使人变懒”:有句名言说“懒惰推动了科技的进步”。Is technology making反过来,科技进步也让人变懒。使用题目中提供的科学研究证据进一步论证,people lazy?并作出解释。第3段得出结论并提出建议:科技让人变懒,人类需要注意不要成为科技的奴隶。范文点评:参考范文精彩点评Is technology making people lazy?[1]Is technology making people lazy?This is quite an【1】利用问句开篇引出话题,同时让读者interesting question many people might never think of.After产生兴趣。careful consideration,【2】my answer is“Yes.Technology is【2】提出论点:科技正在让人们变懒。making people lazy.”[31 A famous saying goes that laziness promotes the advances【3】用相关谚语增强文章的辨识度,脱颖of technology.In turn,advanced technology makes people而出。become lazier after replacing human beings to do what theyshould have done.[4]For example,with the help of robots,【4】用For example举例证明自己的观点。people can clean their houses without even moving their butts.With the advent of computers,the situation is going from bad toworse.[5]Many studies claim that computers distract people,【5】利用题目给出的科学证据增强说make them lazy thinkers and even lower their work efficiency.服力。Maybe that's why many people are hopping from one website toanother,having no idea of what they are doing.[6]To conclude,technology makes people lazy.Mankind【6】得出结论并提出建议。need to be aware of not becoming the slave of technology.话题词汇:driverless car无人驾驶汽车innovation创新double-edged sword双刃剑initiate开始实施,发起take advantage of..利用…laboratory实验室prevalent流行的,普遍的be willing to..愿意…reveal揭露;显露hand over to machines移交给机器四级2021年6月32
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