2021年6月大学英语四级考试真题（三）答案与详解Part IWriting星火英语App时扫码看视颜回轩平结构框图：第1段引出话题并表明观点：电子游戏的爆炸性增长引发严重担忧，其中之一是暴力电子游戏会导致暴力行为。Do violent video games第2段具体论证电子游戏导致暴力行为的原因：孩子缺乏良好的判断力，易lead to violence?+于模仿游戏中的暴力行为；许多电子游戏为了提升游戏者的兴奋度、增加吸引力，游戏中充满了暴力行为；研究表明电子游戏会增加暴力行为。第3段提出建议：对暴力电子游戏应保持警惕。范文点评：参考范文精彩点评Do violent video games lead to violence?[1]The explosive growth of video games in recent two decades【1】背景描述，引出话题。has aroused grave social concern.[2]One of the main reasons is【2】【3】聚焦论点：暴力电子游戏导致儿童that many people worry violent video games could lead to玩家产生暴力行为。violence.[3]This is true,especially for child players.[41 For one thing,at a young age,children usually don't【4】【5】使用For one thing和For anotherhave good judgement and are prone to imitate the violent从两个层面分析暴力产生的原因，层behaviours in games and regard them as being cool.[5]For次分明。another,many video games are full of violence to boost players'excitement,thus enhancing their appeal..【6】A growing number of【6】利用题目要求给出的论据，并进行改research proves that violent video games contribute to children's写，一方面增强说服力，另一方面体现aggressive behaviors in their real life.对语言的灵活驾驭能力。[7 Considering many teenagers are spending a huge amount of【7】结合现状，提出建议。time and money on video games,we need to be alert to the possibleharm of violent games that could be done to children.话题词汇：game player游戏玩家cater for迎合，满足electronic game电子游戏physical and mental health身心健康venue举行场所enormous(尺寸、数量)庞大的，巨大的emerge浮现，出现revenue(公司、机构的)收益，收人tournament锦标赛punch用拳猛击spectator观众yel(尤因恐惧、愤怒或激动而)大叫，叫喊character人物，角色aggression攻击性行为manipulation操纵，操控bullying霸凌，恃强凌弱的行为四级2021年6月53