2021年12月大学英语六级考试真题（三）答案与详解Part IWriting结构框图：第1段描述现象，引出话题：父母的过度保护让孩子缺乏独立性和创造性。My View on Parental：第2段针对现象做出评论，并从三个方面提出建议。Overprotection第3段总结全文，重申观点。范文点评：参考范文精彩点评My View on Parental Overprotection[1I Nowadays,children are the focus of many families,【1】描述现象，引出话题：父母的过shouldering the hope of their parents.Therefore,it's hard for these度保护让孩子缺乏独立性和创parents to fight the urge to tape pillows around their kids and follow造性。their every move so that they never get hurt.Consequently,childrenbecome so reliant on their parents that they have no independentthoughts or creative ideas.Such a situation is of great concern.[2]In my view,【2】先表明自己的观点，指出过度的overprotection and too much care are not beneficial to children's保护和过多的关心对孩子的发development.[3]To begin with,parents should have enough faith in展是不利的。their children.Instead of providing them with ready-to-use solutions,【3】【4】【5】分别使用to begin with、parents should encourage children to come up with their own ideas.and the best thing our parentsThis can be done through dialogues where parents take the position ofcan do is to和beyond that给出mentors.[4]And the best thing our parents can do is to arm their kids了自己的建议：首先，父母要对with knowledge and remind them to be careful.[5]Beyond that,孩子有信心；再则，父母能做的parents should be well aware of that failure is the most natural thing in最好的事情就是用知识武装孩the process of succeeding,and it's crucial to children's emotional子，并适时提醒他们；此外，父母intelligence development.应意识到失败是很自然的事情。【6】As the saying goes,too much water drowned the miller..Soit【6】用俗语“过犹不及”总结全文，重is advisable for our parents to let go and launch children on the申自己的观点，建议父母应放journey to independence.手，让孩子学会独立。话题词汇：selfless无私的devote oneself to..献身于self-sacrifice自我牺性helicopter parenting直升机式的教养方式spoil潮爱；宠坏greenhouse flowers温室里的花朵boundary界限too much water drowned the miller过犹不及monitor监视六级2021年12月53