2023年12月大学英语四级考试真题（二）答案与详解Part IWriting结构框图：第1段引出话题：家乡近些年发生了巨大的变化。The Developments in第2段具体论证：家乡基础设施不断改善、经济结构从单一的传统农业转My Hometown向多元化的产业以及环境保护与绿色发展使家乡更加干净、美丽。第3段结尾：重申观点，展望未来。范文点评：参考范文精彩点评The Developments in My Hometown[1]My hometown,a small town nestling among the foothills of【1】【2】开篇引出话题：家乡发生了Qinling Mountains,has undergone significant changes in recent years.巨大的变化。同时表明身份，引[2]As a student away from home,I am excited to share these出下文。developments with you.[31 On the one hand,one of the most remarkable changes is the【3】【5】用On the one hand和Ongrowing infrastructure.[4]New roads,bridges,and public facilitiesthe other hand分层指出家乡的have been constructed,which has significantly improved the两个变化。transportation and living standards of the town.[5]On the other hand,【4】【6】分别在每一个变化后列举出the economic structure of my hometown has shifted from a single具体例子。traditional agriculture to more diversified industries.[6]A number ofsmall businesses and factories have emerged,creating jobopportunities and boosting the local economy.[7 Besides,the local【T】用Besides引出家乡发生的另一government has taken measures to combat pollution and promote个变化。green development,making our hometown cleaner and more beautiful.[8]To sum up,my hometown has witnessed remarkable progress【8】用To sum up引出全文结尾部in recent years,and I am proud to witness these changes.[9 As a分，再次陈述家乡发生了巨大变student,I look forward to being a part of building my hometown in化，首尾呼应。the future.【9】提出未来建设家乡的期望。话题词汇：countryside农村，郊外infrastructure基础设施undergo经历，经受facility设备，设施remarkable非凡的agriculture农业，农学2023.12/15(第2套)