2022年6月六级考试真题第3套解析Part IWriting第1段引出话题：越来越多的人喜欢向有需要的人提供帮助，这种传统美德值得赞扬和提倡。Roses Given,Fragrance in Hand第2段具体阐述帮助他人的重要性和意义。第3段总结全文，重申观点。范文点评：参考范文精彩点评Roses Given,Fragrance in Hand[1]Nowadays more and more people take delight in offering【1【2】引出话题：越来越多的人喜欢向help to the needy.[2]Helping others in need is one of the有需要的人提供帮助，这种传统美德traditional virtues of the Chinese nation.Thus it deserves more值得关注和掌声。attention and applause.[31 In the first place,people who give a helping hand to【3Ⅱ4】【5】分别用“In the first place..”others are more likely to gain a sense of accomplishment and“Besides..”“Last but not least..”happiness.[4]Besides,the most remarkable significance of来引出三个分论点。helping the needy is that people who have received warmness andkindness are more likely to pass on this love to others.15]Lastbut not least,this sort of exemplary behavior plays a vital role incultivating children's awareness of caring for others,whichmakes a lot of sense in creating a more civilized and harmonioussociety.[6]As the old saying goes,roses given,fragrance in hand.【6】【7】通过引用谚语“roses given,[7 I really believe that a brighter future is awaiting us as long asfragrance in hand(赠人玫瑰，手留everyone is ready for giving a hand to other people at any time.余香)”重申帮助他人的重要意义，同时展望未来。话题词汇：traditional virtues传统美德harmonious society和谐社会sense of righteousness正义感green development绿色发展with clean hands廉洁fairness and justice公平正义compassion同情心common prosperity共同富裕